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Those Sophmores paid twice to minigolf? And who swings live a driver with a putter??? I know that Mayview is a weird town, but I am going to critique the hell out of their mini-golf.

I like the idea that this means that when they were about to play, Spender gets kidnapped, then Ed ditches them for go-karts. Because Ed doesn’t give a shit.

They play because he is the designated driver, and Max doesn’t like the idea that the true golf is the friends you make along the way.

You could have just sent them to Camp Goodfriend if you wanted team bonding. That would have been much easier.

I can’t take the phrase “final hole” seriously. I don’t know if I am thinking it is dirty, or stupid, or what, but I always laugh reading that.

I can’t believe this place basically has a mafia version of the
Desert Flower Bowling Alley and Arcade Fun Complex. This is a beautiful story and would love to learn more about this humble enterprise.

Being kidnapped to go mini-golfing isn’t that bad as you may think. As long as they pay your ticket.

There used to be a place called Playland in my hometown that had both mini-golf and go-karts, so this entire place is valid. And Ed’s decision is also valid.

Don’t feel ashamed Isaac. I got into Hapkido because I watched Kenichi: The Mightiest Disciple for the second time.

The key here, is that if you don’t feel embarrassed about the things you like/do, then no one can use that against you.

This hole is already giving me nightmare because I am trying to imagine what the clown hole would look like given its eye is on the ground.

Also, love the way he is describing the characters here. “lived life under par” is great.

Well that explains the “final hole” part. But can I say I enjoy the descriptions thoroughly here.

Alright, last of the extras. Reading this mini fanfic (one shot since it is by the same author) so the first time I react to the written word…with writing. This will be something.